Let's Make ProGress!

What class do you think is the most difficult? I PROMISE THAT WRITING AND COMPOSITION IS THE HARDEST COURSE I'VE TAKEN IN CHESHIRE ACADEMY!!!

Firstly, let's talk about the progress I've made. In my opinion, i've improved my grammar, especially comma splices. I used to be confused by the meaning of comma and the rule of using it. After one of the grammar lessons, I finally know that the comma is used to connect two incomplete sentences. Besides comma splices, my using of vocabularies becomes better. Although I may not use as many fancy words as before, I can make sure I don't make grammar mistakes. In addition, my construction of articles is good. I can write clear begging, middle and end with interesting hooks and conclusions. It is easy for the audience to notice the places where I am going to talk about another thing or opinion while I always use some tradition words. 

Nevertheless, I am facing a huge difficulty that I don't know what to write, especially in the blog. The requirement of 500 words becomes the barrier of my writing. I am always stuck in the middle, even the starting of the article, and don't know what to write. Thus, I think I should learn to do some brainstorm and write the outline first and then fill my essay with facts and examples. Furthermore,  adjectives and adverbs are needed. In order to enlong the sentences, I should try to memorize some useful adjectives, adverbs and the way of using them properly. 

Last but not the least, I have to rebiuld the passion of writing. It seems that my desire of writing is decreasing day by day which bothers me a lot. I spent hours to finish just one article but get very low grade. One of the most important way to deal with the problem, in my opinion, is to read more books. My mother always tells me to read as many books as possible to replenish my knowledge. To be honest, I haven't read any books after I arrived here. Movies become the only resources for me to learn new things. Well, movies do deliver some knowledge while books can express things in details. Therefore, I will start to read books whenever I am free.

In conclusion, I really did a bad job in the first marking period. Nothing really went well for me and I was frustrated about it. I hope that I could do better in the next marking period since I seem to get used to the life here little by little.