The Difficulty in Writing.

In our last paper, we have written about a significant moment. It contains both the description of the moment and conclusion. However, it is not as same as the usual essay we write since the conclusion was as important as the description. Do you feel confused about writing conclusion? Let's talk about it.

In my first draft, I've only wrote about 5 sentences in the conclusion. To be honest, I've thought for a long time in order to write the conclusion. It was so difficult that I could not even squeeze out a word(just like the situation I am facing now). The worst thing was that I could not state my thesis exactly which was confusing and disordered.

In the second draft, I have added one more paragraph. Unfortunately, it seems to repeat a lot since I don't really know what to add. Besides, I can not find a god way to express my emotion either. The lack of vocabulary has annoyed me for a long time. Repetition appears in my conclusion all the time.

In my last draft, more details were added to the conclusion. I realized that conclusion can also be detailed and specific, including descriptions. Brain storm is necessary since we can describe a lot of details rather than flat words without meaning.

All in all, by this difficulty, I learnt a useful way to write conclusion and how to deal with essays in the future.