FINAL PLAN

I have chosen 5 blog posts in my previous blogs. And as you can see, the first thing I change is there titles. To begin with, my first article names Good Start=Half Way to Success. The weakness of this article is the conclusion. Therefore, I should focus on the last paragraph and try to give the article an impressive ending. The second article is Running with Scissors, which was Be careful of the Danger in the past. I plan to add some comments and suggestions in my starting and beginning to make this article more meaningful. The third writing piece is Angel Sofia & Evil Sofia. To tell the truth, I really like this one, and plan to add some suggestion about how to face and deal with those opposite opinion in one's mind correctly. The forth article is Manhattan Never Feels Cold, which talks about my running experience in Manhattan. Reading this article, I feel that I haven't introduced enough for my running experience, thus I'd like to add some sentences just about running. Last but not least, my final challenge blog is absolutely being chosen. I haven't decided what to do with this blog post yet. But I will figure out soon!

The most significant correction needed to be done for all these articles is Grammar error!Grammar error!Grammar error! I wish that I could find all of them out and change them correctly!