Thesis

In fact, this year is an adventure of struggling, making progress and growing up.

In fact, this year is an adventure of struggling on basic writing, making progress on creativity and growing up to be a distinctive writer.

1.Intro

2.strength -effective organization

                  -cited

                  -incorporate a different voice

                  -different writinf style

3.weakness-intro and conclu

                   -transition

                   -redundancy

4.different process-text

5.different process-reviewing

6.different process-short stories

7.conclu

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