In-class writing

In my opinion, I think the greatest part of my essay is the construction. I can write clear begging, middle and end with interesting hooks and conclusions. It is easy for the audience to notice the place where I am going to talk about another things or opinions.

However, there are a lot of difficulties I can't easily solve them. The first one is grammar. Every time when I write some long sentences, I will make mistakes. It is difficult for me to focus on grammar while I am concentrating on recording my inspiration. Second, the lack of vocabulary annoys me a lot. There are a lot of things I want to describe, unfortunately, I can not find proper words to do that. The only thing I can do is to repeat the words I've used for many time. Because of this, I always can't include as much details as I want. Third, sometimes my mind would get confused, and I can't concentrate on my writing. Although there are a lot of things I want to write, I can't organize them orderly. They confused me a lot.

If I have more time to write, I would like to write my essay in a totally quiet situation without anything disturbing me. In that way I could organize my mind. I'd like to write an outline first.Also I would like to look up on the dictionary to change some of my words, like confusion to another word, because I used this word for too many times.