2014年9月23日星期二

You are the sky full of stars


Once upon a time, there was a beautiful goddess called Starry. Wherever she arrived, there would be shine of stars. Not only good looking, she was also kind and generous. She was the eudemon of a small village called Sky. It was surrounded by mountains, like a little baby lying in its mom's arm. Well, Starry was like a mom of the small town, she wholeheartedly loved the small town and always tried her best to protect the people in the town since she decided to live there many years ago. Because of her, the village flourished more and more. Not only sky is always full of stars, but also the village. The roof of the house, the crown of the trees, the cloud, the wind, the narrow path led to the big city, they were all shined by Starry.
Besides Starry, there was a priest who also claimed himself as a guardian of the town. In the front of his church, there was a huge old tree which was used to be a school as he said. Because of the lack of resources of education, all the villagers dreamed of sending their children to his school. Every year, he accepted many children, and sent them to the Under Tree Boarding School for 12 years as they started from elementary school and finished after college. During the study time, they couldn't leave the school and meet their families no matter what the reasons were.
However, Starry found out that the priest was totally a liar. There was a villager who begged her to send his child a letter because his mom was going to die. Starry could not refuse the requirement of sad man finally, so that she slipped into the school. To her surprise, it was not a school at all but a prison. The prisoners were making huge and sharp knives. She realized that the only reason the priest gathered those children together was that he wanted to imprison them and eat them finally. 
In order to stop this, Starry started to call upon villagers to fight with the priest. To her surprise, nearly all the villagers were deceived by the priest, no one believed her. They even built a group to fight with Starry and refused her to get closed to the old tree. For her love village, Starry didn't give up. She devoted her life to the village that she dushed her head against the huge tree. The tree was broken, with flame shining around it and the children ran out In a hurry. After their crying and telling the story, about how the priest had maltreated them, the villagers finally realized that who is the real eudemon of them. They felt regret and punished the priest together. They didn't find Starry's body anywhere, but noticed that she was becoming the shiniest star while the cloud was sending her to the sky. 
Although Starry seemed to die, she was still using her shiniest flame to protect the village. Every time when villagers rose their heads, they would see stars filling the sky, just liked the smiles I f Starry, who would forever protect them no matter what happened.

1 条评论:

  1. Your writing is clearly written like a story. The whole story is interesting and good to read. My favorite part is where the children get rescued and the people are happy again. You can add more details by the description of the priest and the huge tree.
    I've got confused at the sentence where the priest and the tree get introduced. All in all a very good story with a great idea.

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